I need your feedback. I just finished the first draft of my new 70,000 word novel tentatively titled THE RAIN DANCE LAWYER. Need a better hook for a title, I think.
The
Pitch: Fresh out of law school, a brilliant young attorney with
Indian and cowboy roots and his ranching girlfriend uncover a murder-for-hire scheme
at his prestigious Colorado water law firm. While unraveling the mystery they
devise a scheme with the help of a retired Indian senator and his friends to outmaneuver
hired killers, corrupt lawyers and powerful politicians. Is water really worth killing for? It is in
the still wild, wild west.
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